"In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

Nowadays, in some nations, youngsters use to used to [Grammar Error; Make sure that ‘use to’ is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean ‘accustomed to’, use “used to”.; Checkout This Link] be encourage encouraged [Grammar Error; The past participle is required after “to be”.] to take one year gap for traveling or working purpose, after completing high school and before entering colleges. Although, it is advantageous for those people who wants want [Grammar Error; Did you mean “want”? Alternatively, check whether the singular of ‘people’ should be used.] to explore the world deeply, though sometimes because of these they are being distracted from their studies.

Firstly, majority of the majority of [Grammar Error; An article may be missing.] people after completing their high school, they opt to take a gap year in order know to know [Possible missing preposition found.] their potential to decide their future. To illustrate this, it has been thought that it is the perfect age to explore themselves deeply. Secondly, in this modern era everyone wants to lead their live, independently so to establish their live life [Possible Typo; Please check whether ‘life’ (noun) might be the correct word here instead of ‘live’ (verb, adjective, or adverb).] they want to gain experience by doing jobs which eventually work for them in long run . . [Incorrectly used dash or quote characters; Don’t put a space before the full stop.] In sense that, life is all about uncertainty, we never know what is waiting for us in near future so if we have gather gathered [Grammar Error; It appears that the past participle should be used here.; Checkout This Link] experience in different job fields by taking a gap year after high school then it would be beneficial for securing our future.

On the other hand, sometimes it would impact our lives negatively because by taking 1 year 1-year [Punctuation Error; When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen.] means they we they [Grammar Error; Consider using only one pronoun here.] will be detached with our academic studies. Moreover, after entering college, we sometimes tend to stop going our to our [Possible missing preposition found.] college for this reason. There is a an [Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.] another concerning issue that in this age we love to earn money and , and [Punctuation Error; Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).; Checkout This Link] it easily make makes [Grammar Error; After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “makes”.] us happy. In contrast, by doing jobs and earning money makes us greedy. Additionally, it create creates [Grammar Error; After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “creates”.] our mindset to earn more money that we are earning now because of this mindset, eventually we never looked back to go for further education.

In conclusion, taking a year gap for travel or work, it could be advantage to know themselves more deeply by exploring new places as well as for working also. Consequently, it also has some negative sites, where people ended up by not going college to college [Possible missing preposition found.]